There is a land where baby water nymphs explore the pond, guided by scolding mothers. Where creatures of unknown shapes and sizes walk hand-in-hand with humans. Such is the land of Eketh. Long ago, Eketh was a land full of evil and swine. People had many hardships during these times. To help ease their pain and trouble, the great warrior Elderest used his magic to trap all that evil. Because nobody had the rights or the power to make something simply disappear, he took the evil and created creatures called Gorons, trapping all the evil inside them. The Gorons were banished to the outskirts of town, and that is where they are to this day. There are still problems, yes. There are greedy lawyers and mayors that took bribes. But it was a place where unimaginable beings existed, a place brimming with mystery and magic…
“Y-Your M-Majesty!”
Shane bowed, nervous, perspiration gleaming on his forehead.
“Your M-Majesty, our sp-spies have just informed us that the Gorons are p-planning an attack on us Your M-Majesty! The sp – spies tell us the attack is going to be so huge, it will t – take them thirteen to fourteen years to prepare for it! This is an attack b-bigger than any attack we’ve ever f-faced before!”
King Julian was worried. The Gorons had been creating havoc since they were first created. But this was the worst of all.
“The great Elderest’s descendant, Zachary, and his wife, Rosa, have just had twin children. They are our only chance. We’ll train them and make them warriors. Until then, they must stay hidden from the Gorons. We’ll send them to the place they call Earth, and bring them back when they turn thirteen. Tell Zachary our plan, Shane. Tell him to let his sons go for thirteen years, for the good of Eketh.”
“Yes, Your M-Majesty.”
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My brother made me read this. Although what i read was amazing. You are a great writer Shannon.
Thank you. I appreciate every comment I get. It all helps with the story. Keep reading! I’ll give you a clue: in chapter two, the boys go to Eketh!
Hi Shannon!
Now that I have a better feel for your story, I uploaded a new header. What do you think??? If you don’t like it we can easily change it back. Let me know!
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